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I have recently completed and am proofreading a short story entitled "Arizona I remember you" which can be previewed at the following link:

http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?t=65000

I welcome the input of historians on my tale's historical accuracy (which centers on real-life Pearl Harbor participant Wilmer Gallaher both there and at Midway).  In fact, this is part of my proofing process; I don't want any "howlers" in this if I can avoid it.

David has already leant me a hand in this regard (thanks David!) and if any other scholars here can help me notch-up the accuracy of this mini-version of The Killer Angels meets Tora! Tora! Tora! and Midway, I will be sure to thank you in my "author's notes" at the end of my story.
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